Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the inconvenience I am facing from your habit of playing is loud music till late night. First of all, Let me introduce my self, I am the guy who has been living for 3 months beside your villa. Recently I have shifted my home from Rockville, Washington. As my family insisting me to move due to my son's exam center. Actually, my son has been studying in an Arts college and doing some presentation work as well for the upcoming conference.
Let me come to the point directly, the main problem we are often hearing from your resident is the volume of music is high. As a consequence, my son not able to do the paper and presentation work. Will you please get down the volume of your speaker. So, my son would get some time to prepare a thesis for his conference meeting. This might need a couple of weeks. After that, you can continue on what you have followed in your usual way.
I hope you would understand the problem and take necessary action on this. Please do not take this issue as a low priority. we need this to happen swiftly as soon as possible. Thanks for the patience.
Regards
AK
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted my home from Rockville, Washington. As my family insisting me to move due to m...
^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the point directly, the main problem we are often hearing from your resident is the volume of mus...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... not take this issue as a low priority. we need this to happen swiftly as soon as ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39534883721 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47671689034 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5342305243 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210512221629 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607967134099 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777316125421 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141396869667 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033524556529 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted my home from Rockville, Washington. As my family insisting me to move due to m...
^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the point directly, the main problem we are often hearing from your resident is the volume of mus...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... not take this issue as a low priority. we need this to happen swiftly as soon as ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39534883721 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47671689034 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5342305243 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210512221629 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607967134099 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777316125421 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141396869667 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033524556529 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.