You have a problem with a neighbour Write a letter to your neighbor i your letter Describe the problem say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbors to take

Submitted by igasmr on Wed, 02/12/2020 - 10:05

Dear Neighbour,
I am writing to intimate about the problem where I am facing from outdoor of your building is actually dog barking. The main reason which is stimulated me to report it to you because it is quite noisy passing days.
I have been jeopardizing this problem for six months. I thought to complain about this issue to the Housing unit but I wanted to have the direct discussion before I am proceeding this to the corresponding department.
As your dog barking at mid-night immensely, my family is not able to sleep at night. As a consequence, I couldn't concentrate on my work. Sometimes, it is making me sleep at my work.
Most predominantly, my son is having his annual exam this month. He has to work on his assignments and thesis after school, especially he prefers to work on nights. If this continues, it would be annoying our sleep as well as spoil my son's exam.
Therefore, please keep your dog outdoor in the daytime and put it back to the place where we would not get much noise.
I hope, you would understand and concerned about my situation. And also my suggestion would be helpful.
I look forward to having your cooperation.
Regards,
AK

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dogged'.
Suggestion: dogged
...om outdoor of your building is actually dog barking. The main reason which is stimu...
^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... to sleep at night. As a consequence, I couldnt concentrate on my work. Sometimes, it i...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imes, it is making me sleep at my work. Most predominantly, my son is having his...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66183574879 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8118017089 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6910268093 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9285714286 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145642076631 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471669889618 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558249063147 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714512818778 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495176876179 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dogged'.
Suggestion: dogged
...om outdoor of your building is actually dog barking. The main reason which is stimu...
^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... to sleep at night. As a consequence, I couldnt concentrate on my work. Sometimes, it i...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imes, it is making me sleep at my work. Most predominantly, my son is having his...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66183574879 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8118017089 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6910268093 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9285714286 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145642076631 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471669889618 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558249063147 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714512818778 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495176876179 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.