You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem.. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take

Submitted by junaid_sh on Wed, 09/25/2019 - 08:28

Dear Neighbour,

I am writing this letter to let you know that I'm really disappointed by the behavior of your son.

Let me explain you the situation, I was quite okay with the fact that you and family share a contemporary life style. However, we are facing complications while we go to sleep. Because, you're son is playing booming music every night. At the same time, we are suspecting a drastic smell coming from your house. Due to, these issues I personally not able to sleep and not able to concentrate on my work because of lack of sleep.

We are facing this issue from past couple of weeks. For an Example, Your son comes with plenty of his friends screaming every late night with alcohols. And I believe that they do not respect the society members who must be sleeping that time.

Although, I really respect your approach towards life and understand your culture. However, I would recommend that please guide your son to have such kind of parties in a club instead at home. And he can drink alcohol in the society bar. So that, we all can help to make a better society instead a spoiled one.

I hope that you will consider this letter in a positive way!

Many Thanks,
Shahin

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...riting this letter to let you know that Im really disappointed by the behavior of ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing complications while we go to sleep. Because, youre son is playing booming music eve...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ications while we go to sleep. Because, youre son is playing booming music every nigh...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hope that you will consider this letter in a positive way! Many Thanks, Shahin
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, while, kind of, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59069767442 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39335658853 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4912520826 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176457880615 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557081336575 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560347846577 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105657744601 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034462681323 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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