You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter
. Describe the problem
. say how long it has been a problem.
. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to bring to your immediate attention the inconvenience faced in regards to the usage of parking space allotted to me. Since your parking slot is adjacent to mine and you have students coming at your home to take private tuition, I have observed them using space allocated to me. At times, I am unable to park my car because of two wheeler belonging to your students are already parked.
Let me explain you my situation. This issue started 3 months back after you launched crash courses for engineering exams. I could see number of students coming to your home increased substantially. In addition, students come early and stand outside on the road leading to snarled traffic on the road. Moreover, this concern has been raised by fellow neighbours as well.
Would you kindly arrange for an alternate parking space for students visiting your home. Further, please advise your students to come at a time only when their tuition starts and in case they come early, they can be asked to sit inside the lobby.
I would look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mohit Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...diate attention the inconvenience faced in regards to the usage of parking space allotted to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...am unable to park my car because of two wheeler belonging to your students are already ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...side the lobby. I would look forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, M...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86010362694 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44784519374 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7901403159 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166916085844 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669417372816 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411275129212 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957330420454 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269675728677 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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