Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to the rent overdue letter I received from your store, it was mentioned in the letter that the DVD I borrowed has passed the return date. Kindly note that I have already returned the mentioned movie on the due date.
Let me explain you further, I had borrowed Mission impossible movie from your store on 20th June and the rent period as per standards was 1 week. Exactly after a week on 27th June I went to your shop to return the DVD, but since it was almost 8.00 pm and the shop was about to close the staff took the movie and kept it in the drawer below the cash counter, he said he was getting late and had to rush. He did not keep the movie in the showcase where normally you keep your stock. Perhaps, you can check the drawer I am sure the DVD would be there.
For future, I would like to suggest you to please keep a spare cabinet other than the main showcase where the staff can store the movies in similar situation as mine. If you cannot find the required DVD you can always go through these collections.
Hope you will be able to find the DVD.
Thank you,
Jane Doe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he movies in similar situation as mine. If you cannot find the required DVD you ca...
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Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e able to find the DVD. Thank you, Jane Doe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2752293578 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04317508565 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9766863132 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361552567568 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145518113642 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500942933426 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206416827986 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442083729188 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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