Dear Tina,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I finally put pen to paper and glad that we had an opportunity to spend some quality time with each other.
I had not had such a wonderful time in a long time. After college, work, marriage, and children kept me busy. Now that the children are off to college and on their own, I get some me time. Although, I miss my children it is such a welcome break to no worry about rushing through your morning chores, packing lunch, seeing them off to school, helping them with their home works and assignments. It was a much deserved break in my life. What better way to spend a few days with your best friend. It still cracks me up that we went pub hopping like teenagers and the crazy things that we did on the streets. And, what an amazing host you are, I still crave for the apple pie that you made.
Bangalore is a paradise for shopaholics, I am sure we can spend all day shopping at commercial street, munching on some sweet corn, and enjoy the ice cream at corner house. Now that my children are off on a summer camp and husband is on a business trip, I would be delighted to have you as a guest at my home for a few days. It would be great opportunity for us to relive our good old college days.
Looking forward to your visit. Cheers to all our fun-times.
Love,
Rajie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25882352941 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24080504016 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6328304744 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252535390052 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068171116824 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662160455466 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136390177387 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436585106563 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.