you have recently flown to another country on a business trip you were satisfied with the flight but did not like services at the airport write a letter to the airport manager and say give your flight details why were you disappointed suggest some improvements to the airport services
Dear sir,
My name is Jatin Kumar. Last week, I went to Australia for a business trip by Air India flight. My flight number, as well as seat number, was AI 107 and 50 F respectively. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the services at the airport.
I want to tell you; my flight timing was 11:00 pm, therefore I reached the airport at 9:30 pm. When I entered there, I had to check all the luggage at the checking counter. I was standing in the queue, but I got surprised by seeing a slow service because there was merely one employee at the counter who was checking the weight of our luggage, by which It took a long time there. In addition to it, when I asked another staff member - who was standing at the entrance - for another checking counter, he started to shout on me, which was the poor behavior that I observed there.
Due to all this, I was getting late for my flight because I did not receive even a ticket at that time, and my flight was going to be departed. Therefore I suffered a lot there in a rush. Thus, I would like to suggest you, good, if all procedure of checking are done fast. Apart from it, a total number of counter and employees are supposed to be raised. So that, visitors would not suffer in the future.
Hoping for a prompt action regard to this matter!
Yours faithfully,
Jatin Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, My name is Jatin Kumar. Last week, I wen...
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Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and my flight was going to be departed. Therefore I suffered a lot there in a rush. Thus,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44841269841 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.457717962 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7733639119 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0714285714 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169143647754 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580146432718 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585536464419 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912270130887 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056301960186 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.