You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• describe the place where you are living
• invite your friend to come and see you
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter like this
Dear Anna,
Dear Anna,
I hope this letter finds you in good health.
I believe you would know that I have shifted to Toronto, Canada. The reason for moving here is that I got admission and scholarship for MBA program at UOT. This whole program is funded for me including accommodation & living expenses.
Toronto is a capital city of Canada. I am given an on-campus apartment. It has 2 bedrooms with shared kitchen & bathroom. Neighborhood is very friendly as most of people living are mostly foreigners who are seeking education in different disciplines here at university. These days Weather is very pleasant here as average temperature is 25 degrees.
My semester is completing by end of this month and I will have a summer break for 2 months. I invite you here to visit me during this period. I have a spare bedroom available at my apartment so accommodation will not be a problem. I need to see this city as well so we shall visit this city together. You will have an amazing vacation.
Looking forward to meet you.
Best Regards
MM
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-07-16 | hamzamanzoor | 73 | view |
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. 67
- ARGUMENT:"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once 60
- The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
- You have received a letter from an airline company you recently travelled with asking for your feedback on airline serviceWrite a letter to airline customer service manager, in your letter-why you choose to travel with this airline-say what you enjoyed ab 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...hroom. Neighborhood is very friendly as most of people living are mostly foreigners who are se...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...so accommodation will not be a problem. I need to see this city as well so we sha...
^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...an amazing vacation. Looking forward to meet you. Best Regards MM
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77348066298 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78226339132 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5663364005 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.0 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3125 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182705302408 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569752453395 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499222353518 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104630316173 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268231166659 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.