Dear Mike,
I’m sorry. I couldn’t write to you for a long time, but now I got the pen to share a happy news with you. I got a new job offer, and now I have been working there for about a week. I had to prepare for these interviews, and that’s why I was so busy in the last couple of weeks.
As you know, I had been working at a local company before joined with this, and there I couldn’t get much exposure since there were limited opportunities. Also, I thought that it would be better to adhere to the English speaking office culture since I have a migration plan.
You might be heard about this ABC since it an international company, and there are many branches around the world. I joined with them as a Senior Software Engineer, and part of my team members are working in the USA. So, I might have to work at night to join some meetings two-three times for a week. However, working hours are flexible.
I have a lot of things to share with you. I will write to you when I get free time again. By the way, I am going to sit for the IELTS exam in the coming month and get back to you with the results. I shall stop now.
Regards,
VK
- You have recently joined to a new job. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letterExplain why u moved from previous jobDescribe your new jobTell your friend any news you want to share 73
- You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of 94
- You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter, give details of the job, explain why it is important to you, suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference. 84
- you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job and how you fe 78
- A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. you have had a similar problem in the past.write a reply to your friend . In your letter:1. tell your friend you understand the problem.2. explain what happened to you in the past.3. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'happy news'.
Suggestion: happy news
...ng time, but now I got the pen to share a happy news with you. I got a new job offer, and no...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve been working there for about a week. I had to prepare for these interviews, an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, speaking of, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21333333333 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40503176232 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9251184322 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151915639629 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502498008262 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474102187245 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948337555343 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308464647422 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.