You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.

Dear Greta,

I hope you are doing well. Finally, I’ve shifted to our new house last week. As you know I am living in a small house where is an insufficient living space for a big family. However, It was difficult to live in a small apartment because now my children are growing up. So, I decided to replace it and swiftly searched for new one.
Furthermore, I want to tell you about my house. It is big and spacious than old one. It has three big bedrooms, a small studyroom, a living room, kitchen and two bathrooms. There is also a small garden which have some hearbal plants, flowers and decorative plants. Moreover, It has parking place near the maingate.
However, I would like to invite you on the inaugration of my house on next monday. I’ll be delightful if you’ll come with your family. So we’ll get together and have fun. I’ll be waiting for you on this occasion.

Thank you,
All the best,
Jany

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...w I am living in a small house where is a insufficient living space for a big fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66467065868 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60286941346 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676646706587 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8341221232 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.9333333333 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1333333333 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178898824693 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566024731285 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479123905588 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1095821927 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426887433458 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.56 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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