Dear Sarah,
I remember the last time that we had visited each other in the Rose coffee cafe. Both of us had got tired from the vicissitudes of life, and we weren’t in decent financial conditions.
I had said that my apartment was very old and the cloakroom moulds were always bothering me. However, I could remove and control them by vinegar and detergents. Unfortunately, one day I opened my archive clothes closet for donating some clothes to charities, it was unbelievable that my wardrobe was full of moulds and insects and larva. Very unpleasant smell made me mad on that moment. Therefore, I gathered all of my essentials and left the home.
By talking to some of my near friends and my boss, I could borrow money to live in new apartment. Of course, this new one is far from my workplace and city center but I love it. It has approximately a great terrace that I make a miniature garden in it and I prepare a set of seats and table for my relaxing times.
It is a small apartment but well designed, and I think we can have enjoyable moments beside each other at least for a cup of coffee in my terrace. I am eagerly waiting for your response.
With love,
Sheyda
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, at least, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58796296296 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65444973489 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.513624687 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2307692308 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0467997920166 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166976827384 0.0766984524023 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245272525002 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0312668658247 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251137337492 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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