You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
.explain why you have moved
.describe the new house
.invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Alice,
How are you? Two years back, in one of my trip to London, my stay at your place was really enjoyable.
Five months back, I shifted to a new house as the old house was becoming small for the family. My children, who have reached to an adolescent age, need separate rooms for their study. We were not able to fulfill such needs in the old house.
So, I started contacting popular property agents and luckily with-in 3 months, we got a new ready to move-in house. This is a beautiful spacious house where everybody will get individual room. In addition, there is a guest room, living cum dining room, big kitchen with Italian fitting attachments. Moreover, there are beautiful huge front and backyards where we organize our parties and barbeque at times.
I will be really delighted if you can plan a trip to India and stay at my place for at least 1 week. I believe October would be the best time as far as the weather in India is concerned and also it is a festival time in India.
Hoping to hear from you soon
Take care
Best wishes
Anita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd also it is a festival time in India. Hoping to hear from you soon Take care ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32395409941 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0380390479 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109077083803 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388351580577 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332930891585 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616156577674 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232460665306 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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