Dear RM
How are you doing? It has been very long since I wrote you. I was quiet occupied with my new job. You will be glad to know that I took a Villa near the Marica beach.
You don't believe me It's like a paradise to be near beach. The sunrise and sunset is mind blowing with an awesome view of vast ocean infront of you bedroom. It is very spacious with 4 bed rooms, a hall with elegant furniture, modular kitchen with a garden terrace.Predominantly I thought to take a flat within the city,and my parents suggested to have a villa in the downtown but I got this for a affordable rate. My time just go in watching the wonderful blue ocean tranquility. I bet you are going to like it at once.
So, make a time I am going to through party for all my close friends and you are top of my list. I am really thrilled for our meeting without any doubt which is going to be a blast.
convey my love to sweety pie jenny.
Your lovingly
Nahid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear RM How are you doing? It has been very long...
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...ook a Villa near the Marica beach. You dont believe me Its like a paradise to be ne...
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...th an awesome view of vast ocean infront of you bedroom. It is very spacious with...
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..., modular kitchen with a garden terrace.Predominantly I thought to take a flat within the c...
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...a garden terrace.Predominantly I thought to take a flat within the city,and my p...
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....Predominantly I thought to take a flat within the city,and my parents suggested...
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...thought to take a flat within the city,and my parents suggested to have a villa in...
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...y time just go in watching the wonderful blue ocean tranquility. I bet you are go...
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...friends and you are top of my list. I am really thrilled for our meeting withou...
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...re top of my list. I am really thrilled for our meeting without any doubt whic...
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... my list. I am really thrilled for our meeting without any doubt which is goin...
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...lled for our meeting without any doubt which is going to be a blast. convey my...
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...y doubt which is going to be a blast. convey my love to sweety pie jenny. Your lovi...
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...love to sweety pie jenny. Your lovingly Nahid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17934782609 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50037213676 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2460519744 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1538461538 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130108505985 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049833087674 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336089697198 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627859576667 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412781503258 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.