you have recently shifted to Australia as an immigrant. Your cousin who lives in your native country is getting married next week. He/she has invited you to attend the marriage ceremony but you cannot attend. write a letter to your cousin. in this letter write
-wish him her on his occasion.
-explain him her the reason why you cannot come to attend the marriage
- invite your cousin to Australia
Dear Paul,
Hi, I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. I am very delighted to know that you are getting married. My family and I wish you a very very happy and successful married life. May God shower his choicest blessings on you.
But I am very perturbed to say that I would not be able to attend your marriage as you know that I have shifted in Australia few weeks before. Not only this but also my daughter is sick due to weather changes; so doctor has suggested her a complete bed rest for next week. I have got a job also and my boss would not allow me to take long break so soon. But I will really miss the these moments sadly as we had decided a lot things to do at your wedding.
However I will be pleased if you visit me after marriage. You know there are a lot of seeworth places like Palm Beach, Victoria house and so on. I highly recommend you to visit Australia for honeymoon. Also, the doors of my home are always open for you. I am waiting for you with open arms.
Take care and enjoy your day. Iam waiting for your response.
With love
Anna George
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
...ing married. My family and I wish you a very very happy and successful married life. May ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...d a lot things to do at your wedding. However I will be pleased if you visit me after...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m waiting for your response. With love Anna George
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16355140187 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15047216366 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5810586492 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.6875 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299028111829 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929835712651 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060678692113 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172424670441 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272330814114 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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