You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother.
In the letter, mention:
What class are you taking?
How do you like it?
How long will you take the classes?
Hello Mother,
I am writing this letter to apprise you about the dance sessions I have been attending for more than 15 days and the rational reason for choosing this program.
I am learning how to dance in hip-hop and classical style, which is of 1 hour every weekday. Additionally, I am acquiring some ancient dance culture as I have been fond of it since my childhood.
Furthermore, I am thrilled to be a part of these classes because dancing has always been my passion. I feel overwhelmed due to the exposure of western dance forms and adapting at a professional level. Moreover, I am excited to tell you that my performance would be recorded on the last day of the lessons, which would be uploaded on tutor's YouTube channel.
Besides, I have devised to attend classes for 2 months because I want to enhance this hobby at a superior level. Therefore, my program would finish at the end of next month.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Truly,
Chirag
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| 2021-01-11 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 78 | view |
| 2018-10-31 | Kanstussy | 38 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70520231214 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66721513065 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1757678407 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185923043884 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694926950352 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577673947053 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832260426947 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340299476952 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.