You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
write at least 150 words.
you do not need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................,
Dear lanre, how is everyone around you? Am fine and doing very well. I want to let you know that I have gotten a new job in Chevron. I left the former place where I work because they don't pay well and the stress is too much. I hardly have time for my family. As you know family is very important, so I must strive hard to put them into consideration when looking for job. The new place closes early. I work for 6 hours only. my happiness knows no bound now. how are you managing with your job,I know you will also like to change to a better one. I will let you know as soon as there is an opening for and job in my office.
Thank you for always being an amazing friend. Hope to see you soon. my warm regards to your family .
Yours sincerely
Judith.
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| 2019-05-28 | Judith1983 | 61 | view |
| 2019-02-22 | prettychoice | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear lanre, how is everyone around you? Am fine and...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... former place where I work because they dont pay well and the stress is too much. I ...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt pay well and the stress is too much. I hardly have time for my family. As you ...
^
Line 1, column 500, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... closes early. I work for 6 hours only. my happiness knows no bound now. how are...
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Line 1, column 563, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... my happiness knows no bound now. how are y...
^^
Line 1, column 596, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
... my happiness knows no bound now. how are you managing with your job,I know y...
^^^
Line 1, column 630, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... now. how are you managing with your job,I know you will also like to change to a ...
^^
Line 1, column 671, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I know you will also like to change to a better one. I will let you know as soon ...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an opening for and job in my office. Thank you for always being an amazing fr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...n amazing friend. Hope to see you soon. my warm regards to your family . Yours...
^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...you soon. my warm regards to your family . Yours sincerely Judith. ...
^^
Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rds to your family . Yours sincerely Judith.
^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncerely Judith.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99780591022 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1899915433 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 41.8 76.5299724578 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235380461783 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831009883946 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550028182777 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194939179811 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0086667441496 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.3 8.37731958763 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.48 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.03 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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