You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend, in your letter
-Explain why you changed jobs.
-Describe your new job.
-Tell him/her your other news.
Dear Judy,
It’s been few weeks since we catch up together! Actually, I was busy receiving my position in a new pharmaceutical company and I’m eager to tell you all about my updates!
As you know I have been asking for a promotion, as a senior production specialist, in my old job for a while, but they weren’t responding to my request. So I started sending my CV to other companies, and I accepted an offer from a multinational organization after they had interviewed me.
Let me explain more about my new title. I am the head production specialist of Effervescent Tablet Department which produces one-third of the total gross income of the company. My job description is to manage the processes of manufacture, compression and packaging of five different products.
To surprise you, even more, Reem, my younger sister, is getting married next June! Honestly, I can’t catch my breath, as I have to be with her during all wedding preparations. We already picked a gorgeous design for the wedding dress as well as the cake. It’d be more than great if you could make it to the wedding
I hope to see you soon.
Love,
Randa
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| 2019-09-18 | hany mohamed | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, honestly, if, so, third, well, while, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03045454167 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676767676768 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1839544931 44.8134815571 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.25 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129032465901 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485655025759 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359014789619 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763491387944 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00850495266894 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.