You have recently started work in a new company.Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:•explain why you changed jobs•describe your new job•tell him/her your other newsWrite at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write your own a

Essay topics:

You have recently started work in a new company.

Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:

• explain why you changed jobs

• describe your new job

• tell him/her your other news

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write your own addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Rita,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell you about my new job as you know that I often changes my job. There are many reasons for this , the most important reason that why I changes my job oftenly is the working environment of any place. If I don't find the working environment cooperative I can't do work in such place . In all my past jobs the working environment was not suitable for me and I never enjoyed working there,so I thought it would be better to leave the job.

Let me tell you about my new job. I have started working in a multinational company. it deals in readymade garments. I am appointed as a sales incharge. my work is to keep a record of the sales of company and make a report of it and submit it to the officials. my salary package is very goodand also the working environment is very friendly .I am completely satisfied with my new job.

Looking forward to see you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Geeta

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... my job. There are many reasons for this , the most important reason that why I ch...
^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
... , the most important reason that why I changes my job oftenly is the working environme...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s the working environment of any place. If I dont find the working environment coo...
^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... working environment of any place. If I dont find the working environment cooperativ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d the working environment cooperative I cant do work in such place . In all my past ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cooperative I cant do work in such place . In all my past jobs the working environ...
^^
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...for me and I never enjoyed working there,so I thought it would be better to leave t...
^^^
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ted working in a multinational company. it deals in readymade garments. I am appo...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in a multinational company. it deals in readymade garments. I am appointed as a ...
^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ts. I am appointed as a sales incharge. my work is to keep a record of the sales o...
^^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...t of it and submit it to the officials. my salary package is very goodand also th...
^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the officials. my salary package is very goodand also the working environment is ...
^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the working environment is very friendly .I am completely satisfied with my new jo...
^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e working environment is very friendly .I am completely satisfied with my new job...
^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ied with my new job. Looking forward to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Geeta
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34078212291 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57057520859 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4528922645 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7692307692 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297830287677 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107078818869 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837391894385 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165603943419 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592891175794 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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