Dear Sheldon,
It's been long time since we have last met. I Saw your posts from Sydney on instagram and I hope that you had a fabulous vacation there.
This is to tell you that I have finally got the desired job with the lucarative package than what I have expected. Furthermore, in the new company, employees have several othert benefits such as weekend offs and work-from-home options. As you aware in my old organisation, despite working late nights almost for all the days in the week we have all Saturdays working. Also, I was not happy with the pay that I was earning as that was totally not in par with industry standards for my experience. Hence, I have no reason to say no this exceptional offer.
Also, I am delighted to inform you that I have finally won in my quest for finding a three bedroom individual house with in the city, fitting in my budget. This is truly a dream house for me, as here we have all the amenities that we had desired for such as things like private garden, terrace, play area for kids, dry area for kitchen and wash room uses. If you are free on Sunday why don't you just peek in to our new house? We will be happy to receive you here.
With love,
Akil
- In recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions. 89
- Reading is more educational than watching television or movies. 89
- now a days more people could rather purchase food than cook at home what are advantage and disadvantage of this trend 92
- The best way to reduce youth crimes is to teach their parents parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter Explain 1. Why you have changed 2. Describe your new job 3. tell your other news 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oom uses. If you are free on Sunday why dont you just peek in to our new house? We w...
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Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...happy to receive you here. With love, Akil
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, if, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39013452915 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36649819359 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.067385148 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228031836441 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845082438573 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604193075998 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153647718346 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209415125611 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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