Dear Asal ;
I hope everything is going well with you and your family. I’m writing this letter to tell you about my new job, finally, I hired at New Design Company as a graphic designer and I started my duty last week. As you know, I had many troubles with my previous job like my salary, working hours or my boss's attitudes so I decided to quit and looking for a new job.
I've got lucky because I saw this job vacancy on Facebook so I sent my portfolio for them and they are really like my artwork. Now I’m a design team manager and I have a personal office with a wonderful view of the city. I work in a Tv commercial project and they accept to pay me 6000 per month so that I can rent my own apartment.
Also, I have amazing news for you, my boyfriend and I got engaged last month and we are going to marry next year in Spring.
I really hope to see you soon and I can tell you everything.
Yours
Sogol
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ded to quit and looking for a new job. Ive got lucky because I saw this job vacanc...
^^^
Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and I can tell you everything. Yours Sogol
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09392265193 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26171493027 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2797389372 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249661032275 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111209544904 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689092947948 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135189424082 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771669645515 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.