You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
1-Explain why you change job,
2-Describe your new job,
3- Tell him your other news.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Kareem,
How are you doing? It`s been a long time since we last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to share with you some good news about my job.
I have been worked for Foet Company over 10 years with prestigious positions, but I was looking for new challenges. When I reached the top level of management at the company, I realized that I won`t do more for Foet. Therefore, I decided to change the company for different responsibilities to refresh my career passion.
Recently, I joined a multinational company where its headquarter in Germany, and I have been offered a senior position in Project Management. I will be based in Egypt to run all local projects; however, some overseas projects in Asia region will be directed under my responsibilities till the end of the year. Though, it might be interesting to expose to overseas experience.
Besides the new job, I would like to share that I shifted to a new accommodation because of the new work. As you know, there is a horrible traffic during the day time, so I decided to live close by the office.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ponsibilities till the end of the year. Though, it might be interesting to expose to o...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'horrible traffic'.
Suggestion: horrible traffic
... of the new work. As you know, there is a horrible traffic during the day time, so I decided to li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76262626263 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89730444088 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3107297066 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227172387547 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708965684227 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901564918326 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136846046413 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104013137089 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.