You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser and say
– Give details of the course.
– What did you like or dislike about it?
– Suggest some improvements to the course.
#Dear sir or madam,
The purpose of my writing is to give details about the English-speaking course I have attended for a couple of days during last weekend. Let me elaborate in dgetails.
Mn
Elucidating in details, the course begin on 27 th September until 28 th September in the Community hall. Firstly, teachers were highly experienced and professional and delivered majority of resources and material related to improve the skills in english language. Besides , it also enthusiast us multifarious benefits of using the vocabulary in exams and job section. Apparently, I need to prepare for my competitive exams so this course has initiated me a significant Knowledge.
Additionally, on the second day fear of public speaking is the main reason for everyone. Subsequent course featured power to speak in audience. Moreover, the grammar exercises was informational section. Also, to grab the basic understanding In a quick time was illustrated through visual projector. That was quite intriguing too. Perhaps, the audio and visual system was not too effective and was of superior quality which was sometimes extremely difficult to understand.
At the end of the day, I would like to suggest you if you will strengthen your audio and visual system so that it cn be precisely listened.
Yours sincerely,
Ram.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3317535545 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09988573383 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691943127962 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.383274607 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3571428571 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138882459433 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03764902897 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575727791919 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980585355884 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728281692441 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.