You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say
– When and where did it take place?
– What is your complaint?
– Suggest a reasonable solution.
Dear sir or madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your company’s service that introduced to me.
Last week, l contracted with your company to transport my household appliances and furniture from Cairo to Alexandria.Unfortunately,while i was arranging my devices in the new house, I discovered that my smart TV screen was broken.Morever, some of my furniture has been scratched which indicates the inappropriate handling of my households.
Given to the fact that all of these mistakes are because of your team mishandling and according to my insurance policy, i have the right to be compensated with a new screen with the same model.Additionally, all of my furniture flaws should be fixed at your expense.
Your prompt response to tackle this problem is highly appreciated, i can be contacted on this email.
Yours faithfully
Mahmoud Sayed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... and furniture from Cairo to Alexandria.Unfortunately,while i was arranging my devices in the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...e from Cairo to Alexandria.Unfortunately,while i was arranging my devices in the new h...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Cairo to Alexandria.Unfortunately,while i was arranging my devices in the new hou...
^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Morever
...ered that my smart TV screen was broken.Morever, some of my furniture has been scratche...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additionally
...d with a new screen with the same model.Additionally, all of my furniture flaws should be fi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...kle this problem is highly appreciated, i can be contacted on this email. Yours ...
^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntacted on this email. Yours faithfully Mahmoud Sayed
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97849184937 2.54303337028 156% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.731965603 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.8 76.5299724578 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151599105942 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955135146988 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371253335111 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898005268379 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416158811613 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 8.71597938144 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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