Dear Sir / Madam,
I am one of the recent customers of your online company movers-bd.com, a company that helps people moving their household from one location to the other. I am writing this letter to complain about the broken piano stand that is happened due to the carelessness of your team during my recent move from Kalabagan to Uttara.
I heard a lot of good words from my friend who recently has taken your service to move his household. But my experience with your company is not quite like my friend. During the registration period, I had provided a list of valuables and fragile items. But when the team came for the final move on the 31st of March, I was astonished to know that they do not have that list. And also they disagreed to move the piano which was pretty heavy and fragile as it is very old. I insisted them to move it along with other items, they agreed later on. But when all the items arrived at the destination, I discovered that Piano stand is broken which was the hardest part of the piano structure. I am very disappointed to learn from my niece who was accompanying your people during the move that they drove recklessly the whole road and this is the main cause as per my niece's description.
I am still in shock to have such a bad service from your people. However, I would like you to settle this matter by providing me the repair cost of the broken leg of the piano as per service agreement. Also, I am holding the payment until the repairing is done. Hopefully, I will receive the required refund for the payment for repairing the piano as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Abed Joy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ecent move from Kalabagan to Uttara. I heard a lot of good words from my frien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 297.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50505050505 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48669265824 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1663658233 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174358400192 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059926162736 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448315499037 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116454618593 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242003346074 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.