Education is one of the basic human rights, but we live in a world with the paradox of what to teach students and what not. Some people impose that music, drama and creative writings are compulsory to include in the school curriculum but others disagree. In this essay, I will discuss why learning arts subjects are an essential part of academic studies despite the existence of other schools of thought.
People, who are a believer of materialized benefit, do not prefer art subjects like music or drama to be included as a school subject. They believe so because there is no direct benefit of studying those courses. Also, these subjects are useless in the STEM world we live in. For instance, when a student completes his/her graduation when he will look out for a job, he will find it difficult to almost impossible to find a job in the field of drama or music or any other art courses. For this reason, people are a believer in studying courses related to science and technology rather than art subjects.
However, Other people believe that art subjects help people to build the mindset of the student to be psychoactive. Courses like music, drama, creative writings and others assist a student to be sensitive and creative. All the successful and creative people of the world were great admirers of arts. For example, the great inventor of our time, Elon Musk, founder of TESLA & SpaceX, mentioned in his lecture that, he got all the urges to build all of his machines after reading the creative science fictions of Isaac Asimov. Thus, art subjects should be a mandatory subject in the school curriculum although science and technology are dominating our era.
As we live in the era of science and technology, what is to be done with the courses related to arts? Some people support the opinion that courses like music, drama and creative writing should be removed from the school but others think it should be in the syllabus. In my opinion, art subjects should be mandatory for each student of the school as it helps a student to build the mindset of a complete human being and help people to succeed in their future endeavor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76075268817 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4820409506 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5857708063 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253019292645 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097145923885 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743197342312 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174574027789 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415764896889 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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