Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude about your services. The hospitality shown by your staff was beyond comparison.
Last Saturday, I visited to your prominent hotel "Aashiyana" . I did not booked the room in anadvance as it was uncertain tour. I was little bit nervous about reservation. When, I entered in hotel firstly I was very delighted to saw the astonishing features and pleasent atmosphere. The person sitting at reception desk was very cooperative. He pampered me alot and attend me on priority basic.
I was thrilled to find out that your manager offered me a room with exceptional features. He suggested me that it would be a good idea for me to book room at 2 floor as i can relish the mesmerizing view of nature. Apart from it, he surrounded me with delious food, amazing sites, famous visiting places like ancient museum, mall road, forts and so on. I felt like home in that soothing atmosphere and you definitely prove your punch line "Home away Home".
Would it be a good idea for you to bestow your workforce with small but priceless reward such as a greeting letter or some motivational gifts as upgradation or bonus for their remarkable duties. It will surely enrich them with encouragement.
Now, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my g...
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...erizing view of nature. Apart from it, he surrounded me with delious food, ama...
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...o hearing from you. Yours faithfully Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97787610619 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00487032457 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681415929204 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0046781612 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3125 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15157457436 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444252820515 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040010450692 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881788910233 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299577609082 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.