Some people think that young people should be ambitious. Others believe that it is fine if young people do not have big aims in life..... Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Being successful itself a great pride for everyone in this competitive world. Presently, desiring success is thought to be lucrative asserted by sheer percentage of people. By contrast others have conflicting views. They think that having satisfaction is the best way to live. Here, I would like to throw light on both views with my own perception.
To begin with, thrist of getting towering success plays a phenomenal role to uplift their living standard. To be specific, aspiring people work round the clock for optimum opportunities. Thus, they accumulate surplus money and nourish their family with luxury lifestyle. Consequently, ambition allows them to relish their life in astrocratic way.
Secondly, the role of ambition for making a person goal oriented is beyond comparison. It does not only reminds aim in every walk of lifebut also stimulate to pave the road of destiny. Hence, it works as a boosting tonic and prevent people from wrong way. On the contrary, we can not underestimate its darken side.
Numerous points can be mentioned to reveal its negative side. Initially, some people have enormous ambition but less tallent, abilities, and willing to toil hard. Hence, they indulge in bad companies for the sake of massive outlay. As a result, it proves like a bane for them which ruin not only their lives but also the life of their dear ones.
Besides this, some time lust of money force them for work on behalf of their physical stamina and strength. Thence, neighter they achieve success nor get rid of mental and physical stress. Moreover, in this rat race they involve themselves in hectic schedule and do not spare time for their family. Eventually, bonding among family members suffer in the absence of quality time.
From my notion, ambition trait is a best way to achieve dream world but not on the cost of health and kith and kins.we should precise both the ideas wisely to get best out of it as it is well said, "every thing is made for human but human is not made for everything ".
To conclude, getting success is not a piece of cake for everyone. Ambition should be determined according to inner caliber, interest and circumstances so, we can relish its golden sideas a boon.
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Being successful itself a great pride for everyone in this competitive world
Being successful itself is a great pride for everyone in this competitive world
Sentence: From my notion, ambition trait is a best way to achieve dream world but not on the cost of health and kith and kins.we should precise both the ideas wisely to get best out of it as it is well said, 'every thing is made for human but human is not made for everything '.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: To begin with, thrist of getting towering success plays a phenomenal role to uplift their living standard.
Error: thrist Suggestion: thrust
Sentence: Consequently, ambition allows them to relish their life in astrocratic way.
Error: astrocratic Suggestion: autocratic
Sentence: It does not only reminds aim in every walk of lifebut also stimulate to pave the road of destiny.
Error: lifebut Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Initially, some people have enormous ambition but less tallent, abilities, and willing to toil hard.
Error: tallent Suggestion: talent
Sentence: Thence, neighter they achieve success nor get rid of mental and physical stress.
Error: neighter Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Ambition should be determined according to inner caliber, interest and circumstances so, we can relish its golden sideas a boon.
Error: sideas Suggestion: sides
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better to write IELTS task II in 4 paragraphs, try this pattern:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. first,... Second, ...
paragraph 4: conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1775 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.733 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.451 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.892 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.229 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ne in this competitive world. Presently, desiring success is thought to be lucrat...
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...ay to live. Here, I would like to throw light on both views with my own percepti...
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...ith, thrist of getting towering success plays a phenomenal role to uplift their ...
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...a phenomenal role to uplift their living standard. To be specific, aspiring peop...
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...ily with luxury lifestyle. Consequently, ambition allows them to relish their lif...
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...them to relish their life in astrocratic way. Secondly, the role of ambition...
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...late to pave the road of destiny. Hence, it works as a boosting tonic and prevent...
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... people from wrong way. On the contrary, we can not underestimate its darken sid...
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...ry, we can not underestimate its darken side. Numerous points can be mention...
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... to reveal its negative side. Initially, some people have enormous ambition but l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9414893617 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57254961929 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598404255319 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7241987411 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4166666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135252212558 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378174487478 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422969104023 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637093507343 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364134759443 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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