You have seen an advert in a newspaper for a part-time voluntary job working with children. Write a letter to the employment agency. In the letter
• say what the job you wish to apply for is
• explain why you want to apply for the job
• describe some of the skills and qualities you have that would be useful
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the part time job advertised on 23rd July 2021in Times of India, under temporary jobs vacancy.
To begin with, I am expressing my interest to be the part of the same NGO, who has given the requirement to teach children under 10 years that too free of cost. As I am aware that your employment agency recommends the name of the candidate to the employer.
Furthermore, I love to teach kids, those who cannot afford the education or who has lost their parents. Moreover, I have the thought process that every child has a right to study for their bright future so I am more inclined to assist lovely kids.
Besides, I would like to tell you that I have taken nursery teachers training so I am very well versed how to teach children below 10 years of age. Not only I understand their education parameters but also I have done the pediatric course so I can help them in their diet for healthy growth of brain for grasping early.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... this letter with regards to one of the part time job advertised on 23rd July 2021in Time...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
... 2021in Times of India, under temporary jobs vacancy. To begin with, I am express...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n under 10 years that too free of cost. As I am aware that your employment agency ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61780104712 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46407259178 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2165578936 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211060536316 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705769216541 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580889549686 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110174656645 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616660651008 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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