Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Amir and I am writing this as I saw your Ad for baby-sitting of your 6-years-old child in an Australian Magazine. I have been living in your neighbor for more than a decade, and been doing some volunteer works at this city's plaza in order to help kindergarten mentors and teachers. So, I think I can deliver the job's specifications right away.
Throughout my life, I have always been spending time with children especially 5 to 7 years old ones. I exactly know what they love and how to approach them as a babysitter. I can also teach them how to read and write if they are already not familiar with this kind of education. Besides, I know more than 100 team-based games that I can do these games with your child, so, he/she will strengthen their group skills sooner.
While I am in Australia, I would like to improve my knowledge about children and their potentials in my free times, so, I am going to a public library and sometimes spend on a daily basis.
I am looking forward to hearing from you,
Best Regards,
Amir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...help kindergarten mentors and teachers. so, I think I can deliver the jobs specifi...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...t familiar with this kind of education. besides, I know more than 100 team-based games ...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'spend'.
Suggestion: sometimes spend
... so, I am going to a public library and spend sometimes on a daily basis. I am looking forward...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48958333333 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65653593232 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7580327723 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185094933748 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670919909782 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494731733515 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108052403363 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452518041589 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.