You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with the job, what I have seen an advertisement in a magazine. I am part-time working at the Daycare, what I am looking after seven children, also I try to migration to Australia, for that reason this is a suitable offer for me.
Let explain in detail why we are hair me because my education in food and nutation subject, I completed the first aid course and otherwise I love child. I am not only work in Childcare but also, I teach up to fifth-grade students. If you get me to look after your child, you also benefit because I will care and primarily teach your child.
If I will get a job and go to Australia. After that, I have many plans to execute, for instance, I will be tasted the food and travel many historical places when my leisure time and holiday.
I, therefore, request you to kindly accept my application and help me with the work and I ensure that I will work my level best. Please feel free to contact me, if you need any additional information by mail or direct call.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
H.M. Zahid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... seen advertisement in a magazine. I am part time working at Daycare center, where lookin...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ional information by mail or direct call . Thank you for your cooperation. You...
^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration. Yours faithfully, H.M. Zahid
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, regarding, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5260310221 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4789856594 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9090909091 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275251589843 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986025686207 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733350088592 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154632922761 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503425813505 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.