Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request the job position of child caring. I would like to take this job and I will explain my reasons as follows.
I saw the advertisment on the magazine yesterday. After reading the requirements, I considered my situation and I think I am suitable for this job. First, I grauated in XXX Normal University this year, majored in children education. Second, I take myself a gap year since I would like to do some internship in double-language kindergardens in my city. Third, as the elder brother of my famliy, I had experience of taking younger brother. Last, I took the Ielts test and the Australia is the one of most countries I wanted to visit.
With your assistance, if I got the job, I will appreciate this work and do my best for the youngsters. During the free time, I would like to travel around the city where the family locates.
Thank you for your consideration on me. Please check my materials required in the advertisment at your convenience. Do not hesitate to ask me with futher questions. I am looking forward your reply soon.
Sincerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... will explain my reasons as follows. I saw the advertisment on the magazine ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, third, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70256410256 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95364137467 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3312194305 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157925511138 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530030992214 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466363475951 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978662154401 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274017284441 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.