You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
Explain why you would like the job
Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
Say how you would spend your free time while you are in australia
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the job of babysitter, the advertisement of which was given in the magazine “Australia’s vacancy”.
The reason why I am applying for this job is that I always wanted to start my own crutch as I love children, and this opportunity to look after a child would not only provide me the experience of handling a child full time but also enhance my understanding of Australian culture.
I have the valid skills and experience necessary for this job. I have done my graduation in child psychology from a renowned university and bagged many certificates in this field. My previous job as a supervisor in a Preschool has prepared me to handle children and their problems efficiently. These qualities prove my suitability for the job.
In my free time, I would like to explore the city of Sydney and visit eminent tourist places. Also, I intend to explore the country of Australia for future business purposes.
Looking forward to a positive reply from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Ishween kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my i...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e me the experience of handling a child full time but also enhance my understanding of Au...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my understanding of Australian culture. I have the valid skills and experience n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide. Yours faithfully, Ishween kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00028805201 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7840239596 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193529922449 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721872709313 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354214966737 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996907747664 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031616415875 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.