Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I have seen your advertisement in the magazine. I am delighted to say that the requirements suits with my qualification of being a nanny for your child. Being around babies is something makes me happy and cheerful.
Let me explain why I feel myself as the perfect caretaker for your child. I am a father of a 5 year old baby girl so you are assured that I can perform all the duties and responsibilities perfectly. In my native place, my wife is a working women and I take care of my baby in her absence. I need a roof to stay in Australia, so staying with you will make me feel like in a family and of course I can stay around your child for almost all the time.
My main motto of coming to Australia is to pursue my career studies further. My college timing does not clash with my job and I can tackle both the responsibilities maturely.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'clash'
Suggestion: clash
...ies further. My college timing does not clashes with my job and I can tackle both the r...
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Line 6, column 168, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a mature way" with adverb for "mature"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... I can tackle both the responsibilities in a mature way. Thank you for your kind considerati...
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Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consideration. Yours faithfully, Jay
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i feel, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33152173913 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79224638654 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7407715967 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4545454545 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208945338751 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860310676645 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692559061676 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139285207701 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658665620582 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.