You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the opportunity to educate Hindi language in your community college. I have seen this advertisement in The Daily magazine last Monday.
I am graduated in Hindi from Bharat University, London in 2002, aftermath I have been teaching Hindi language and correlation with other languages to primary students in Sofia College. I would like to teach the same courses in your community college during night shift, as you have many Indian students there in the society. This course will help them to learn and write in Hindi literature for their higher studies purpose.
Currently, I am teaching in Sofia college morning classes and I do live in the same locality where the above mentioned community college, therefore, it will easy for me to travel to your college from home as it is in walking distance. I am free during night hours, hence it will help me to consume my time during night timing.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s to primary students in Sofia College. I would like to teach the same courses in...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...me during night timing. I look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9011627907 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55297443678 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.661511822 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266673435339 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10470454808 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640908173428 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151555278571 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345067232752 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.