You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the advertisement I saw in The Hindu newspaper yesterday regarding job vacancy of the tutor at your community college during night timings.
I would like to take this opportunity in teaching microbiology to science students of the institute during night timings. The microbiology course will provide the basic guidance of hygiene to students and make them professional and skilled to work in any hygiene industry such as food factory. In addition to that, this course will also guide them on how to perform laboratory medical tests for infection detection like malaria testing.
I have done masters in microbiology from Pune University and I am teaching this subject from 15 years in SP College during morning hours. Furthermore, I did the course on ‘teaching skills’ recently from Jain University which makes me a more competitive candidate for this post.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Suggestion:
...fection detection like malaria testing. I have done masters in microbiology from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, regarding, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26582278481 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96075381126 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8175534056 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188513349491 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720145696756 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419001363066 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106826218828 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355154600762 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.