Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in reference to the advertisement you placed in Time Education for a Physic teacher in community college. I am confident that my advanced knowledge, practical pedagogy, and teaching experience aligns well with the qualification you are looking for.
I am interested in teaching Physic. I hold a Master’s degree in Physic and a postgraduate diploma in Education, and 4 years of extensive experience in physic guest lecturer position in colleges of the University. I have effectively designed customized lesson plans for students following course outlines and also executed non-teaching duties such as preparing progress reports, developing and organizing teaching materials.
Additionally, I also possess strong presentation and communication skills with the ability to convey information to students and school officials in a clear and easy to understand manner. I would be very grateful if I could be considered for the position. I am available for an interview next Monday.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Chirs Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I am interested in teaching Physic. I hold a Master’s degree in Physic and a ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...position in colleges of the University. I have effectively designed customized le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55172413793 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31160177286 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5477180582 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8181818182 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269757202102 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951171694804 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723291489848 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160939517861 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777268990363 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.