Dear Amber,
I hope you enjoying the holiday season in Japan and hope your family is all well. I came to know from Jenny that you have permanently moved to your hometown in Italy. I am writing a letter to apologize for the physics notebook that I borrowed from you during the last term, but I forgot to return.
I am indebted to you for lending me this notebook just before the term final. I intended to return it within a few days but to my bad, I totally forgot which I deeply regret. I’m not quite sure if this book is still important to you. If necessary, just let me know and I will manage to send it to your address. I will also bear the courier cost and post it via express airmail immediately. Please let me know what you want me to do.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and stay fine.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nently moved to your hometown in Italy. I am writing a letter to apologize for th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... last term, but I forgot to return. I am indebted to you for lending me this ...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is notebook just before the term final. I intended to return it within a few days...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I totally forgot which I deeply regret. I’m not quite sure if this book is still ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24844720497 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21445775642 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.48974264 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1818181818 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330728609444 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115964242896 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108263261875 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216362256565 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109831916425 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.