You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.
Write a letter to the couple. In your letter,
1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job.
2. Say what else you could do for the family.
3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published yesterday in one of Australia’s leading family magazine ‘Fam-Jam’, where you asked for the Hindi language tutor who can teach your children Hindi for a year. I have the valuable knowledge and experience to teach this language best and would love to take this job.
I am very confident that I would be able to render a great understanding of language to your toddlers since I have had a good experience in teaching Hindi to many of my students in the primary school where I was a Hindi teacher for 2 years. Besides teaching Hindi, I will also provide your kids some information about my home country and the lifestyle over there.
By the way, I recently immigrated to Australia and living with my Uncle who is a citizen of Australia. And, while I am new in Australia, I am looking for my first job and as this job seems as my previous experience in my home country it would be a great beginning for me here as well. For more information you can directly contact me on 9876543210 or email me through a@a.com.
I am looking forward for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
SM
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, so, well, while, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5980861244 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83184881102 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7419919818 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318549213 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127780982107 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070534036335 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19401121281 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726710193501 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.