Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a resident of Ontario city, and writing this letter with regard to an article published in the columns of your esteemed newspaper on awareness on improving the environment. This is a great initiative to protect our environment by cleaning the garbage near the seashore, and I would like to be a part of this campaign and work for this social cause.
I have worked on similar campaigns related to environmental improvement and protection of our natural habitat, and my past experience would add great value to this initiative. Apart from this, I have a team of five members who would like to indulge in a manual garbage picking process near the sea. Also, there are some dustbins and cleanliness equipment that I want to donate separately.
As this campaign is starting from Monday morning, My team and I will be available every morning for two hours till the end of this program. We will actively participate in all cleanliness activities, and share our inputs for fruitful results. I have some ideas which will help this campaign to operate efficiently.
I hope to hear back from you soon.
Kind Regards,
Peter Parker
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...otection of our natural habitat, and my past experience would add great value to this initiativ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, apart from, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93846153846 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79750052806 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0642488579 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103127616697 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424386081794 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049298049884 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767089467084 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470581721729 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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