You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach Englishoverseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter Tell them where you saw the advertisement Explain why you would like to go Describe the skills that you have that you think wou

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You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English
overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter
Tell them where you saw the advertisement
Explain why you would like to go
Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regards the voluntary position advertised recently in
The Herald newspaper, looking for people able and willing to teach
overseas.

I have recently graduated from university, and I am looking for
rewarding and fulfilling temporary work before I apply for positions
related to my studies, and I think the vacancy you have would be ideal
for me.

I feel that I would be able to contribute to the position as I have some
teaching experience already and I am a native English speaker. I have
also worked with various different levels and abilities of student so
would have no difficulty adapting to the requirements of the job.
I would be very interested in putting my name forward, and would like
some additional information regarding the role, specifically the exact
dates and any additional costs that I may need to pay.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
J. Massey

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ncy you have would be ideal for me. I feel that I would be able to contribute...
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Line 13, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eady and I am a native English speaker. I have also worked with various differen...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apting to the requirements of the job. I would be very interested in putting my ...
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Line 20, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tional costs that I may need to pay. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, i feel, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09493670886 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84813642735 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1380562803 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253841809642 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114298690384 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720303289528 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081641553134 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744515690467 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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