You have seen an advertisement for a part time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. write a letter to the manager
describe your experience
tell him why you are interested in the job
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the advert given by you in local newspaper for part time job, and I am keen to work as a chef in the evening hours.
I had been working as a cook in the Royal Hotel daily for 3 years, owing to which, I have great experience to prepare various cuisines ranging from Chinese to Indian. Moreover, I took part in couple of cooking competitions and won as well with flying colours.
Actually, Hotel management course is being pursued by me, so this job would help me immensely to polish my personality. Apart from this, the job is crucial for me to earn money as my family has been suffering from financial crisis.
In my perception, I would to to be an appropriate candidate for this vacancy as I have enough passion and trust for this work. In addition, my experience in this field would also be advantageous.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Maria Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ert given by you in local newspaper for part time job, and I am keen to work as a chef in...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...l crisis. In my perception, I would to to be an appropriate candidate for this va...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66207972635 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2686046722 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275978921546 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101740963359 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618494868539 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145736619143 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566570124252 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.