You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
WRITE A LETTER OF APPLICATION TO THE TOURIST OFFICE
I have seen your advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide and I want to apply for that position. I’m a student at a tourist school so I’m looking for a job that help me gain some experience in my study field. I also have a goal to become a professional tour guide. I think I am a suitable candidate for this job because I have lived in Tuyen Quang for most of my lifetime, so I have various information about Tuyen Quang City and surrounding areas. I am also very active, outgoing and enjoy meeting new people, I can say I am really good at talking with people. I have a big passion for touring so I enjoy learning about history, and Tuyen Quang’s history isn’t an exception. Although I’m still a student, but I have some experiments on touring guides. I have attended some activities about touring in Ha Noi, Hoi An-Hue. I used to be assistant to some famous company about touring.
That’s all I can say, I’m looking forward to your reply.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gain some experience in my study field. I also have a goal to become a profession...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al to become a professional tour guide. I think I am a suitable candidate for thi...
^
Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Tuyen Quang City and surrounding areas. I am also very active, outgoing and enjoy...
^
Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... am really good at talking with people. I have a big passion for touring so I enj...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42458100559 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63945049528 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6511620007 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276841155918 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112526739316 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120511750183 0.0603063233224 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160043683927 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116215686132 0.0580467560999 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.