You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city. Write a letter of application of tourist office. In the letter:
Give your reasons for wanting the job
Explain why you think you can do the job
Describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
I saw your advertisement for weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around “Karaj”, today. As I am from Karaj and all my predecessors have been born, lived and growed in Karaj, I really know the city and love it. so that I hold interest in showing my beloved Karaj to tourists, visitors, and other people. I enjoy speaking about “Shah Abbas Motel” or the pretty entrance bridge which is a memorable from Sasany government in thousand years ago. However I am a busy girl, this part time job at the weekend is satisfying for me.
I have shown “karaj” to my friends from other cities including Tehran, Shiraz and Bandar abbas, and even some friends from other countries such as Lebanon, Germany and India. so, I am completely familiaur with the attractions of stunning karaj. Besides I know English well and I can explain for foreign visitors, too. I will appreciate it if you accept me to accomplish my desirable job.
Faithfully yours
Zeinab Khalaj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I saw your advertisement for weeke...
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Line 9, column 464, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...s a memorable from Sasany government in thousand years ago. However I am a busy girl, th...
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Line 9, column 484, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...asany government in thousand years ago. However I am a busy girl, this part time job at...
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Line 9, column 515, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ars ago. However I am a busy girl, this part time job at the weekend is satisfying for me...
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Line 9, column 544, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...girl, this part time job at the weekend is satisfying for me. I have shown 'karaj&a...
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Line 13, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ies such as Lebanon, Germany and India. so, I am completely familiaur with the att...
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Line 13, column 256, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...with the attractions of stunning karaj. Besides I know English well and I can explain f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, really, so, well, even so, speaking about, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00831604023 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8680977477 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166286446496 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686502071854 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781773053948 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119932242937 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362872112847 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.