You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement in daily newspaper and wanted to apply for the vacant position of network administrator. I am a junior network engineer with almost five years of extensive experience in various IT fields. I have a great passion towards security and cloud programming but I have not had the opportunity to become accustomed in this area.
To begin, I have done numerous technical positions related to this job in many highly reputable firms in the country. My first career as a network expert commenced in a service provider company which assisted me to demonstrating my abilities. Afterwards, I began to co-operate with a factory as an IT supporter that make me got familiar with variety of software and how to properly install them.
It would be kindly appreciated if you could consider my enormous experience needed for this position as I think that I could be more productive than other candidates because of being a recently certified network engineer with deep knowledge in managing, implementing and troubleshooting highly advanced networking equipment.
I am keen to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John Smith
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| 2019-11-19 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 73 | view |
| 2018-05-13 | rezafathi | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ensive experience in various IT fields. I have a great passion towards security a...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...I began to co-operate with a factory as an IT supporter that make me got familiar wit...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23834196891 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08891736822 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4222343523 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167293640298 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655565003867 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054462755949 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855069822609 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452664777423 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.