Dear Sir,
Myself Manish, a student of your university from the batch of 2018-2022.
Recently I was alloted a shared room L-222 on campus and I'm facing a lot of problems to adjust with the other roommates.
Let me explain you my situation in detail.My roommate is persuing his degree in music production, hence a lot of time we have many of his classmates coming in to the room for their music practice and other assignments, I agree that it is a part of their academic requirement but it is causing me porblems, for example: I am unable to study because of the noise and as my final semester is approaching it is extremley important for me to have a quite room to study.
I approached my roommate with this issue and he did not bother to understand my situation and adjust to it.
I would prefer a shared room with someone who is quite and will be really helpful if he is in the similar field of study.
Yours faithfully,
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('quite') instead an adjective, or a noun ('room') instead of another adjective.
...t is extremley important for me to have a quite room to study. I approached my roommate wit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6678382139 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.568891729 44.8134815571 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15667208969 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740027230038 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219857633266 0.0603063233224 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801573130214 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019158707189 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.