You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
For the past few weeks I have been in shared-living. At first, it seemed fine for me to work in this arrangement. However, it is becoming difficult day-by-day with another student as he disrupts my routine cycle by creating a number of issues like coming into the dorm at late nights, having his friends over at the dorm while I am studying or working or playing loud music.
I am finding it very hard to cope up with this situation because the other student is not being considerate about my requirements and does what he feels like most of the times. My study cycle is into ruins because of that and I cant seem to concentrate on anything.
I would like to have a change in this current arrangement so as to suit my needs. It would be better if I could have the dorm room all by myself and without a roommate or another student per se. This would be great for my academics as well as personal space.
Kindly request you to take action at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Shalaka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...cle is into ruins because of that and I cant seem to concentrate on anything. I wou...
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Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ve a change in this current arrangement so as to suit my needs. It would be better if I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54484577681 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1359206483 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17881571317 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642657764629 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405790465243 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103518108689 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279442008858 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.