Dear Sir,
I am glad that I had this opportunity to live in college and it saved me a lot of time from commuting. However, there have been several problems since I moved in two months ago. I would like to explain some difficulties I have faced during my stay that made it impossible for me to concentrate on my studies.
As you are informed, I am sharing the room with my roommate called Jane. Although I have great respect for her, unfortunately, we cannot get along well with each other. Firstly, because not only she makes lots of noise during the day herself, but also, she invites her friends to the room regularly and they stay up late making lots of noise. Moreover, she does not cooperate in cleaning the room and I have to bear the burden of cleaning on my own. It is worth mentioning that her invitees make a mess whenever they come to our room.
Finally, since I am studying for my university exams that are of great importance for me as last semester's student, I would be grateful if you take steps to change my room or move my roommate to another location so that I can focus on my lessons. I prefer a single room and I am ready to pay an extra cost if required.
Your kind cooperation is highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Razieh Ahmadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'semesters'' or 'semester's'?
Suggestion: semesters'; semester's
... are of great importance for me as last semesters student, I would be grateful if you tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4678111588 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58087337274 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639484978541 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2738838183 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127916090637 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445665468971 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573449720545 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622039904775 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038664804084 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.