You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the hindrances faced by me. My roommate whom I share the room with creates lots of issues and the current circumstances has become unbearable for me at present.
I am fed up with my roommate habits and his unplanned motive of calling up his friends late in the night. My exams area approaching in the next few weeks and it would be really difficult for me to study to score good marks in the exams.
I would like to have one separate single room where I can prepare for my exams without any disturbance. I would be greatful to you if you can help me get rid of this obstacle and finding a quiet and calm room for my studies.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
FaizalReza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... quiet and calm room for my studies. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42176870748 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45658305674 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9016852596 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169352245321 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671661632149 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579131857036 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101072455109 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378563945952 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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