DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
I am writing to highlight an issue that I have been facing with my room for a significant time now. Allow me to elaborate.
To start with, I am staying with another room mate in Room 414. The issue started few days after moving in and I have reported the issue to the building and maintenance incharge. However, nothing has been done till date. There is a big problem with the drainage of the toilet which has not been fixed. Besides, if anybody in the building flushes their toilet the water will overflow from our toilet and create a mess in our room.
Furthermore, the problem not only hampers with our day to day functioning but also poses a health issue. It feels like we are stuck between rock and a hard surface. In addition, due to the said issues it is not possible to focus on our studies as well.
Laconically, we have a considerable time remaining in our 42 weeks contract and it would be appropriate to move us to a new room. It cost me an arm and a leg to pay for this place. I hope you will empathize with my situation and take prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41826923077 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47479434774 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.157734946 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6428571429 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171914698751 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541577518606 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658678528019 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966963613463 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362542088814 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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