Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to problems which I have faced in the allotted hosted room.
College management provided me with a bed in room number 401, while I joined in the university. Along with me one more student shared the room. The size of the room is very small and it is very difficult for two person to stay.
Both of us form different state, so our luggage are more. There are no adequate place to keep our items. Moreover, ceiling of the floor is low and there is a possibility to hit fan, if we accidentally rise our hand. And, another major issue is bed, it is very heavy and placed close to each other. There is no enough space to hang our leg.
Kindly provide us a spacious room, where both of us can stay freely. And, instead of steel bed, if we get wooden cot, it would be very helpful. I would prefer to have a laptop table, which is not there in current room.
I am looking forward of your earliest response. Thank you for your understanding.
Regards,
Mahesh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
... small and it is very difficult for two person to stay. Both of us form different s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31566985337 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3750900557 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7142857143 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162888235897 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462505154659 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575192368757 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897602513078 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624936205098 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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